It's my day to add to this year’s Kidlitosphere Progressive poem, a collaboration thanks to Irene Latham. the creator of this wonderful April tradition. After Laura Purdie-Salas started us with a "swoop" of an opening line, it's been followed by eleven other poets and their images, connecting, moving us on to other places, while a couple of voices continue to"tell" this story.
And I'm also happy to visit Michelle Barnes' Today's Little Ditty with an echo poem in response to the challenge given HERE on Michelle's blog.
After paying close attention to the poem, I realized that I would be starting a new stanza, and this raised some questions: Do I keep the same intent of nature and a voice or two, following along with Michelle's line in the previous stanza? Or can I move us into a new area entirely? This is exciting; the poem is nearing the middle and perhaps some different action is required?
After reading Michelle's line, I knew that she had given me a push toward NEW!
Here is the poem with my line added:
A squall of hawk wings stirs the sky.
A hummingbird holds and then hies.
If I could fly, I'd choose to be
Sailing through a forest of poet-trees.
A cast of crabs engraves the sand
Delighting a child's outstretched hand.
If I could breathe under the sea,
I’d dive, I’d dip, I’d dance with glee
A clump of crocuses crave the sun.
Kites soar while joyful dogs run.
I sing to spring, to budding green,
to all of life— seen and unseen.
Wee whispers drift from cloud to ear
Here are the participants:
2016 KIDLITOSPHERE PROGRESSIVE POEM
April
1 Laura at Writing
the World for Kids
2 Joy at Joy Acey
3 Doraine at Dori Reads
4 Diane at Random
Noodling
5 Penny at A Penny and Her Jots
6 Carol at Beyond LiteracyLink
7 Liz at Elizabeth Steinglass
8 Janet F. at Live Your Poem
9 Margaret at Reflections on the Teche
10 Pat at Writer on a Horse
11 Buffy at Buffy's Blog
12 Michelle at
Today's Little Ditty
13 Linda at TeacherDance
14 Jone at Deo Writer
15 Matt at Radio, Rhythm & Rhyme
16 Violet at Violet Nesdoly
17 Kim at Flukeprints
18 Irene at Live Your Poem
19 Charles at Poetry Time
20 Ruth at There is No Such Thing as a Godforsaken
Town
21 Jan at Bookseedstudio
22 Robyn at Life on the Deckle Edge
23 Ramona at Pleasures from the Page
24 Amy at The Poem Farm
25 Mark at Jackett Writes
26 Renee at No
Water River
27 Mary Lee at
Poetrepository
28 Heidi at My Juicy Little Universe
I think your line is perfect, Linda. I am up early for day 3 of nanny duty, yay! Wonderful addition to "our" poem. This process continues to intrigue. And delight. Thanks again to the lovely Irene!! Janet F. (FB Janet Clare)
ReplyDeleteOh, how I love those "wee whispers" from the clouds, Linda! Now I'm well and truly hooked. Here's the direct link to your DMC poem today: http://michellehbarnes.blogspot.com/2016/04/dmc-frogs-and-alligators-and-herons-by.html
ReplyDeleteLinda, the wee whispers from the clouds can send us into a new imaginative realm of a child. I am loving the poem so far. Sitting with the poem a while, adding a line, and sending it out feels like sharing a secret. That game when you never knew what message would come out in the end.
ReplyDeleteO what are those wee whispers?? I am excited to find out. :) Thank you, Linda! xo
ReplyDeleteOh I love the wee whispers. Where will they send the poem?!
ReplyDeleteMmmmm... "whispers drift" is a gorgeous pairing of words. You've made a lovely bridge between the first part of the poem to the next part, Linda - I wonder what those clouds are whispering to Jone? :0)
ReplyDeleteLinda, the gentle drifting of soft whispers is such a beautiful thought. I can picture this in my mind because I am always looking to nature for inspiration. From cloud to ear is a wonderful link. Your start to stanza 3 is going to send us where???
ReplyDeleteOoh, this is lovely, Linda! I like how you picked up on the mood and nudge of Michelle's line and created something organic from there. And...added a bit of mystery!
ReplyDeleteOh, those wee whispers drifting . . . wonder where Jone will take us tomorrow. Just when I thought our poem had a solid pattern, it goes drifting off ... not surprised that you added a cloud to the images.
ReplyDelete"whispers from cloud to ear"...very nice!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone. It is pure pleasure to be a part of Irene's Progressive Poem!
ReplyDeletePerfect, Linda!
ReplyDeleteLoved the whispers. I finally have mine up.
ReplyDeleteI am so late this week getting caught up. I decided to keep the poem suspense and visit each contributor in order, though! I love the image of the cloud whispering...I used the word "wee" yesterday - and I hadn't read this yet...
ReplyDeleteGreat addition. Now on to Jone -
It is wonderful to have a voice entering the poem...
ReplyDeleteCatching up late, but -
Yay community!!
xx
What a wonderful line, Linda! It's perfect and I'm off to see where this poem goes next!
ReplyDeleteLinda, I love your hyacinths and biscuits quote! You start the next stanza with seen + unseen but heard: clouds and whispers. What are they saying? Are they singing back?
ReplyDeleteI'll continue my belated catching up with Jone....