This is one that kept needing work, but it was a good challenge to write, to keep the structure. Thanks to http://mainelywrite.blogspot.com/ for the great poetry ideas!
Poems please me every time
They sing, at least I hope they sing
peculiar nuance of line.
Poems please me every time
and warble a bit in their refrain.
Though laboring at similes,
Poems please me every time.
The words, the words are just the thing.
I'm so impressed with your poetry this month. I love that you keep trying new things.
ReplyDeleteAh, don't you love it when it's birthed. The labor is intense, but the time and pain is worth it!
ReplyDeleteThe repetition in this one... sings!
ReplyDeleteI love all the different forms of poetry I'm learning by reading your blog! I've spent the last half hour finding them all over the web - perhaps I'll try one. I like this poem of yours that capturs the feeling of working on a poem!
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