I've been writing a poem each day in April, about all kinds of topics, and enjoying every word I've written and loving every word I've read, too. There are so many talented writers. Just as I saw in the March Slice of Life Challenge, there is much to appreciate in the blogging/kidlit world.
If you haven’t heard yet, Irene Latham, at Live Your Poem... has created a Progressive Poem group for the month of April. You can find the group’s names and links on the right. Thank you Irene for asking me to participate, for the marvelous idea and for making it work so seamlessly. It’s been a joy to watch for a line each day to see what’s next. It’s a poetic cliffhanger bonanza!
I pass this on to Greg at Gotta Book. Looking forward to it, Greg! Here’s the poem with my line added:
If you are reading this
you must be hungry
Kick off your silver slippers
Come sit with us a spell
A hanky, here, now dry your tears
And fill your glass with wine
Now, pour. The parchment has secrets
Smells of a Moroccan
market spill out.
You have come to the
right place, just breathe in.
Honey, mint,
cinnamon, sorrow. Now, breathe out
last
week's dreams. Take a wish from the jar.
Inside,
deep inside, is the answer…
Unfold
it, and let us riddle it together,
...Strains of a waltz. How do frozen fingers play?
How do fennel, ginger, saffron
blend in the tagine?
Like broken strangers bound by time, they sisterdance…
their veils of sorrow
encircle, embrace
Feed your heart with waltzes and
spices.
Feed your soul with wine and dreams.
Humble dust of coriander scents your feet, coaxing
seascapes, crystal sighs and moonshine from your
melody.
Beware of dangers along the path of truth
And
beware, my friend, of too much bewaring–
strong hands
cushion you, sweet scents surround you—now leap
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Also - There are still lots going on for Poetry Month. Find Jama Rattigan's blog post at Jama's Alphabet Soup to discover so many Poetry sites in the kidlitosphere doing wonderful things! Cathy, at Merely Day By Day, is joining Mary Lee, at A Year of Reading in a poem a day this month. Other daily poem writers include Amy at The Poem Farm, Donna at Mainely Write, and Laura at LauraSalas. Plus Greg Pincus of Gotta Book has just published his first E-book, The Late Bird. Now he's celebrating by giving one, or more, away. See the blog that tells all about it here
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I am leaping. What a great line, Linda!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I wonder how this is going to turn out?
ReplyDeleteWow Linda. Thanks for all the great links and info on poetry month. I only wish I had discovered your blog at the start of April :) Oh well, next year!
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of the poem passing on- the end is sure going to be a cliffhanger!
Oh, that was a great line, Linda! Now what will Caroline, Sheri and Irene do with that...a great start to the ending scene! No pressure on them! Ha! Got to read this ending! Sweet. And what fun!
ReplyDeleteLeap into _____? What a great addition and opening for the next writer. I'm so glad today is your day so I can see how the poem moved after Tara's line. You are so good at gathering resources, thank you!
ReplyDeleteInspiring line, Linda. Love it!
ReplyDeleteI laughed when I read Donna's comment above. No pressure at all - haha.
Ooooh - a leap! Perfect! Great job, Linda. Looking forward to seeing where this line lands.
ReplyDeleteI am curious how you would have finished the poem yourself. It is unbelievable that a poem can grow day by day through different poets.
ReplyDeleteDear Linda - wonderful, wonderful, this leap into the unknown... thank you so much for your contribution! I'm excited to see what tomorrow brings!
ReplyDeleteBefore today, I did not know that there had to be a leap. Now it could not be any other way! Leap with trust! Indeed. a.
ReplyDeleteLeaping! Yes. Love where this is going.
ReplyDeleteLovely! There is such comfort in that line....and to leave off with leaping...excellent!!
ReplyDeleteLoving the word choices!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing...
Mandy @ The Chockboard
What a cool way to write poetry collaboratively.
ReplyDeleteLove it Linda,
Bonnie
Yes, a leap! Well played, Linda!
ReplyDeleteOoh, what a fun idea! I love the way that everyone's ideas are combining to shape and change the path of the poem. And your line is awesome -- "leap" is such a strong word!
ReplyDeleteI like the linebreaks you chose, Linda. I felt a real drawing in as I read it today. The words seem to wash me along and pull me into the poem. What a wonderful collaboration. It would be nice to see what a classroom of children who tackled this with a purposeful plan could achieve, though they might be too impatient to wait an entire month.....I am having trouble waiting now. Thank you to all the poets. Janet F.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely and comforting image. PERFECT! ;)
ReplyDeleteA very comforting line, Linda, and it fits well with the line before it!
ReplyDeleteI have been loving this poem each time I check in on its progress and I have been so excited for your day to arrive! As I expected, you did not disappoint. Your addition is fantastic and I love that it ends with "leap," one of my favorite words!
ReplyDeleteThis is fun to read and fun to try on each line...where might I have gone? Certainly nowhere as clever as you! I love the line before yours too. You did well to let the list of instructions propel the story forward with a leap!
ReplyDeletePerfect! This poem is more exciting everyday. It is amazing that 24 different poets have contributed.
ReplyDeleteI have been mulling and mulling. I'll be posting in the morning, California time. And no early hints from me! :-)
ReplyDeleteLeap! Love where the poem has gone. This morning it reminded me of write and pass progressive pieces I used to do with high school writing club students-how much more fun with the larger community online!
ReplyDeleteOh Linda, allow me to gush at your line: Absolutely Brilliant! I love LEAP! I wonder how Greg would continue this one, this poem is turning out to be such a thing of beauty.
ReplyDeleteI have just given a talk this afternoon on kidlit and using the web as a resource to a group of (mostly American) teachers in an international school here in Singapore, and I made mention of your blog. Hopefully they drop by and say hello. :)
Thanks for the wonderful comments everyone! I'm sorry I didn't have time to reply to each. I am looking forward to seeing what Greg's clever writing will bring to the poem.
ReplyDeleteLove the line, Linda!!
ReplyDeleteSlices in March. Poems in April. What will May bring?
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