It’s my turn to add a line to Irene
Latham’s annual Kidlitosphere PROGRESSIVE POEM, now the third one being written. Find all about it here.
And see where’s it’s been, and who will finish the week in the list on the
sidebar. I’ve been reading and imagining what might be next each of the past
twenty-three days, and now it’s time for me to step into this traveler’s shoes.
With peacocks and elephants, riding on eagle’s wings, following Irene’s advice,
and packing sapphire eggs for the journey, my pack and thoughts are filled. I’m
headed to the coast, ready for anything. (I think.) Amy Ludwig VanDerwater has
brought a new idea to me, one of determination and affirmation, but then... I love surprises, and hope Michelle Barnes of Today’s Little Ditty likes them well enough too. She picks up the pack next. There are only
six days left! Here's Line 24:
2014 Kidlitosphere Progressive Poem
Sitting on a rock, airing out my feelings to the
universe
Acting like a peacock, only making matters that
much worse;
Should I trumpet like an elephant emoting to the
moon,
Or just ignore the warnings written in the rune?
Those stars can’t seal my future; it’s not
inscribed in stone.
The possibilities are endless! Who could have
known?
Gathering courage, spiral like an eagle after prey
Then gird my wings for whirlwind gales in realms
far, far away.
But, hold it! Let’s get practical! What’s needed
before I go?
Time to be tactical— I’ll ask my friends what I
should stow.
And in one breath, a honeyed word whispered low—
dreams —
Whose voice? I turned to see. I was shocked.
Irene’s
“Each voyage starts with tattered maps; your dreams
dance on this page.
Determine these dreams—then breathe them! Engage
your inner sage.”
The merry hen said, “Take my sapphire eggs to charm
your host.”
I tuck them close – still warm – then take my first
step toward the coast
This journey will not make me rich, and yet I long
to be
like luminescent jellyfish, awash in mystery.
I turn and whisper, “Won’t you come?” to all the
beasts and birds,
and listen while they scamper, their answers
winging words:
“Take these steps alone to start; each journey is
an art.
You are your own best company. Now it's time to depart!"
I blow a kiss. I
hike for days, blue eggs pressed to my chest
One evening's rest, campfire low,
shifting shadows brought a guest.
Oh yay! A guest! Who could it be? I have a million ideas and am so curious about tomorrow. Such a fun line. And a campfire. What could be better?
ReplyDeleteThanks Amy, these final few days are going to be fun!
DeleteOh Linda, pretty dangerous leaving a line like that in my hands. My mind immediately veers toward my children's horror inklings... fighting it! fighting it! Just the same, it's a great line and thank you for opening up the possibilities to me. :)
ReplyDeleteI know, I thought a bit that way too, Michelle, but can't wait to see where you take us next! I'm sure it will be exciting!
DeleteA guest! How wonderful and unexpected! Can't believe just six lines to go... April is on the Autobahn!! Thank you, Linda. xo
ReplyDeleteThanks Irene, love thinking of the autobahn and the hurry for this traveler. Can't wait to see!
DeleteExciting! Your line reminded me of this small poem by Gary Snyder:
ReplyDeleteHow Poetry Comes to Me
It comes blundering over the
Boulders at night, it stays
Frightened outside the
Range of my campfire
I go to meet it at the
Edge of the light
That's beautiful, Laura. Thank you for sharing. I don't know it, and now am happy to have it.
DeleteWhat a great little poem! Thanks from me too for sharing.
DeleteI read it first without noticing the title - that's just great, and one I didn't know. Thanks, Laura!
DeleteAh, the campfire warms and then a guest arrives. Makes me think of a sign I saw in a local Vietnamese restaurant that invites "the guesses" to come to a Cambodian festival. You have invited a guess.
ReplyDeletePerfect for this! A guess of a guest is next!
DeleteWonderful story, we've been 'guessing' with Irene as host all month, haven't we?
DeleteOh Linda I love the campfire and the guest! And Laura, I am saving this poem by Gary Snyder. I love how he captures this/his(?) writing process. It's like the itch I feel when a poem comes to life. I often get my best ideas at night. Thanks to you both for such a nice start to the day.
ReplyDeleteI agree, Janet, the poem is wonderful. Thanks!
Delete* from Janet F.
ReplyDeleteA guest! A guest! Has this guest been following and there all along, or is has our character come into their area? Maybe the guest is hungry! Hey, we could cook eggs over the campfire! I can hardly wait to see what happens!
ReplyDeleteAnd will the guest finish the journey with our traveler? I can't wait either, Donna. Thanks!
DeleteOooh...mysterious and yet (perhaps) welcome...you've opened up new avenues for those of us at the end of this poem's journey, Linda!
ReplyDeleteI bet you're really wondering what's going to happen, Tara, since you are in charge of wrapping every thing up in a tidy package, or may not so tidy? Thanks!
DeleteAh a guest (now that we've thrown off those beasties!) I wonder who it will be?
ReplyDeleteUp to Michelle now. It's rather fun handing off something like this, isn't it? Thanks, Buffy!
DeleteAhhh - shadowy intrigue. What fun, Linda! Thanks, and I wonder what Michelle will make of it?
ReplyDeleteMe, too. I'm sure she already has a terrific idea! Thanks, Robyn!
DeleteI really liked Amy's line and was wondering what you'd do with it - well done! Intriguing, with internal rhyme and a surprise...can't wait to find out who the guest is! (I have to admit, the image of a campfire reminded me of our highlights workshop - could the guest be David, banging the bongos??)
ReplyDeleteHa! What a wonderful thought, Matt. But I guess you would have to be the next writer, then, for that notion. Thanks for the comment. There's so little time to go that I am really wondering how it will all turn out!
DeleteI love that you brought a campfire into it, Linda. All adventures should have campfires in. And great suspense to pass on too.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Catherine. It seemed like a walking, camping journey to me, hence the fire. Excited to see what's next after Michelle's boy appeared!
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