I'm continuing to write haiku and haiku-related poetry this month. See below.
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When leaving school on Sunday afternoon after a few hours of work, I saw this hawk sitting atop one of the lampposts. There is a tree to the side of the lot, but as you can see, not as tall as the lamp post. We have some trees on our grounds, but not many. We do have a wetlands over a small berm next to the school's property, and then a large park. We are lucky to have it. That also means that we have lots of birds, my favorite red-winged blackbirds, chickadees, magpies, killdeer and hawks, more than one species. They sometimes fly around the school as if it's their personal race course. This day, a quieter day on Sunday, the hawk sat, waiting for a meal, waiting for something. He sat for at least 15 minutes. I was surprised, and grateful for the chance to sit quietly and notice.
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hawk settles
lamppost, no pines -
pavement, no mice
Linda Baie © All Rights Reserved
The poem is so peaceful. I love the word "settles". I feel like it settles the reader for the experience of reading the rest of the poem. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Michelle. Hope the week has started well!
DeleteWhat a moment to treasure and capture with your poem. Thank you for sharing such a peaceful scene.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kay. It was lovely to just sit & watch (like the hawk).
DeleteMy kind of photography and noticing. Poor hawk with no hope of a critter on the pavement. Isn't it amazing how long they do sit and observe!
ReplyDeleteYes! I really was amazed that he sat so long. We see many flying around together, so maybe he was waiting for his buddies? Thanks, Elsie.
DeleteNoticing with imagination brings creative results. I bet that as a grandmother you pass on the nature noticing wonder, skills and habita to the next generations.
ReplyDeleteOh, Terje, I hope so! Thanks for the thought.
DeleteWhat patience, 15 minutes... Waiting for something, or just resting. Hmm, I'm imaging that hawk's world with your words.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Julieanne, I wonder too what thinking goes on.
DeleteSitting patiently
ReplyDeleteWaiting for dinner to come
Given time it will
Love that you replied with your own haiku. Thank you for the lovely start to the day!
Delete"Being a poet begins with watching" ~Marianne Moore
ReplyDeleteThank you-will print for me!
DeleteWe need to settle to notice, don't we? How marvelous to come upon such a sight, Linda - that hawk looks rather regal and "in charge" doesn't he?
ReplyDeleteIt is lovely to have these moments, Tara. Thanks!
DeleteI so enjoyed your slice about observing and the picture and haiku about the hawk. It brought smiles to think of you and the bird in the moment.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Crystal. The times that happen like this indeed are special to me. Thank goodness I have them.
DeleteI like how you set up the contrasts. I wonder what kind of hawk that is. It looks too dark to be a red wing hawk like we have here. My mom taught me about birds and nture, much like your grandparents, I imagine. I was surprised the other day when students were reading a Wendell Berry essay and could not visualize jonquils or pileated woodpeckers. We had quite the talk about nature. Background knowledge--knowing the world makes such a difference to readers (and writers).
ReplyDeleteI agree for some students, Lee Ann. They are often so busy with lessons and teams that there is no time to just be outside. Some parents take them on nature adventures, but that's about the limit of their experience. Glad you shared.
DeleteI love the twist to the ending of your haiku. I also like the essay part of your post, talking about the power of observation.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Deborah. It is an important part of my life.
DeleteSuch a powerful reminder to take time to notice, reflect and wonder in our fast paced lives. I love the poem you created from the experiences, and I was cheering for the mice! (Apologies to the hawk!)
ReplyDeleteHa! I imagine that those mice were well hidden, at least the hawk didn't move for a long while, Melanie.
DeleteThis poem is so peaceful - like your post. Stopping to notice the magic of nature is such an important part of spring....thanks for the reminder.
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome, Anita. Thank you, hope you have this time this week!
DeleteOh Hawk watching. It's so fascinating! "Settles", this captures a hawk perfectly. Thanks for sharing the joy of watching!
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome, Kendra. It was a good few minutes.
DeleteThis is great, Linda. It amazes me how people (like you) can capture so much with so few words. It's really awe inspiring to me!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dana. It's something I am trying hard to do. I'm usually pretty wordy. I appreciate your compliment.
DeleteGreat haiku example! You caught a moment and filled it with wonder.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I love the idea of 'catching' Rose.
DeleteWaiting and you waited with him as you sat quietly and noticed. This reminds me of Irene's waiting in her poems this month. Love your description of your school. I remember that my students and I looked up "berm"
ReplyDeletelast year when you used it in a slice that I shared with them. It was not familiar to me, but now I keep encountering it.
I like the way you keep surprising us with your haiku this month. Love the wordplay in this one.
Thanks Ramona, you have a good memory. We are going 'over the berm' today for Earth Day, to clean out trash in the wetlands & to listen to the meadowlarks & red-wings!
DeleteYour haiku perfectly captures the patience of the hawk. It's amazing what we notice when we take the time to look, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteThanks, Katherine, you're absolutely right.
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